Unit II: Proof – Argument – Literacy
Project 2: Rhetorical Analysis Webtext
- warm-up exercise:
- Rhetorical Analysis exercise due Sat 27-Feb
Week 8
M 29-Feb read/discuss: chapter from Day (2001), The Modern Invention of Information (pp. 7–36) PDF in D2L
- focus/discuss: developing ideas from/beyond Rhet Analysis toward Project
- Continue research — finding/choosing representative examples, sources scholarly (articles & books) and online (share/consult info, communicate in discipline, etc.)
W 02-Mar hybrid work — comment & reply in thread below — see Discussion Prompts:
- discuss Day Chapter 2 (cont’d) + your project/topic
Vaidhyanathan (2011): “The Googlization of Knowledge: The Future of Books” (149−73) PDF in D2L
- watch video: BrainCraft — “What is a Fact?” PBS Digital Studios (2015)
→ All week: continue selecting sources and developing ideas for project, notes & examples for each issue/category…
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specialized discourse of your field/discipline in “Information Paradigm” —
Information, Knowledge, Expertise, Research, Argument, Evidence/Proof,
Discourse communities, and communication conventions (rhetorical/written).
F 04-Mar Activity: project warm-up → identify topics of specialized discourse of your field/discipline
- discuss examples from
Day & Vaidhyanathan readingsyour selected sources
+ from
- focus: topics for project → create outline
» Google Doc Guide / Worksheet
*looking ahead: generate notes (complete “worksheet” guide) & create outline; if possible, begin drafting section of project (for Monday workshop)
» Quotes from Day Chp. 2
» W 02-Mar Discussion Prompts
A. Post Comment (by 1230pm):
1. Using a quote from the chapter,
briefly note (~2 sentences?) any ideas, observations, insights on this topic pertaining to your discipline/field —
especially concerning information, evidence/proof, “documentation” methods or materials; publication types; institutions, circulation, and the discipline as “ecology” (recall Monday’s discussion).
2. Give a brief (1−2 sentence) “status report” on your project development, since the Rhetorical Analysis:
topics that now seem to be most significant or require more discussion; new sources (as “representative examples”); and/or any areas you still need to work on by considering further —
Information, Knowledge, Expertise, Research, Argument, Evidence/Proof,
Discourse communities, and communication conventions (rhetorical/written)
B. Classmate Reply (by 1pm)
In brief response (1−2 sentences), observe or speculate the distinction/difference of discipline conventions, as noted by your classmate in relation to your discipline/field on this topic. Perhaps connect to the quote or topic you mentioned, or use another passage; in any case, try extending the discussion by noting new insights or observations —
particularly about information (types, uses), conventions (of methods or rhetorical tropes), institutions, or values/priorities of discipline.
*reminder: bonus participation credit for replying to multiple classmates
“In “Qu’est-ce que la documentation?”, Breit argues that industrial progress demands not only better access to scientific documents but also cultural developments that prepare for and support such progress. Documentation performs both these roles as a science in the service of science” (p 29).
The dominant driving force for social change throughout all of hominid history has been the ongoing development of better technology. Technology is an extension of human attributes and has been key in elevating humankind to the status of “rulers the world”. Through the use of that technology, we have learned much about the universe of which we are a part. And all that we have learned thus far, we have written down; for, the very nature of science is cumulative and organization is crucial in order for that information to be passed on to posterity.
“Analogous to an organism being analyzed in terms of its agency within an ecological system, the book-machine is connected to other books and other organic “machines,” forming systemic assemblages in the conservation and transformation of mental energy throughout history.”
Information in chemistry is twofold; the practical purpose of chemical discovery is to allow for replication of an experiment in order to mass produce a final product. The intellectual purpose of a discovery is to outline the underlying reasons that a given reaction proceeds, which allows for further prediction of reactions and new experiments. Generally both of these goals are tied into one journal document, and allow for both replication of an experiment and understanding of why it works, connecting it to all the data that has come before and leading it out to a final economic/medical use.
So far I have been generally on pace with my project, having grouped my topics of my Rhetorical Analysis into evidence and knowledge, and expertise and information, with both groups overshadowed by research encompassing them all, that is conveyed in a certain manner within discourse communities through well-designated conventions of communication. What this all means is that due to the rather fact-based nature of my journals and the nature of chemical research being in order to replicate discoveries on a commercial level, there is little argument save the statement of one object being superior to another for a given reason, which is less argument and more discovery.
1. Quote: “Otlet’s conception of the social and historical attributes of texts thus demands that texts be understood in terms of their networked and evolutionary relations to one another and, subsequently, that knowledge be understood in terms of these relations. For Otlet, texts are networked to one another in terms of historical influence and interpretation, and external organizational devices, such as the Universal Decimal Classification system, are explicit acknowledgments of shared genealogies and historical alliances”
It seems that the author suggests that texts are — and almost must be — tied through historical evolution; that is, texts build from each other and influence each other. This is very relevant to political science because political scientists use older texts to build on new ones. Once one theory is conceived and introduced, it will most likely be expanded on and evolved, so to speak, and other theories will branch out of it. This helps build the field of information and evidence of certain behaviors and theories.
2. Status update: although I’ve found some good sources, I am still combing through them to find the sources that best exemplify my field and that will work well for this project.
As I stated in my post, the very nature of science is cumulative. Texts expand and evolve organically as new information becomes apparent. And that’s why I’m such a huge fan of science: Everything is updatable, repeatable, and falsifiable.
I like your observation on text and information relating to the ever changing world in each instant
I used a quote saying essentially the same thing: “Otlet conceives of the expansion of the book’s intellectual totality in terms of historically determined social systems of input, production, and output. For Otlet, books are part of an evolutionary process of thought, and as such, books contain what came before them in other books.” The idea that books and knowledge evolve is important to understand and helps to give us context to what we study today.
I am required to take political science classes for my major. I agree with your statement about old information and evidence is used to create new theories and observations. The things that I have been looking for in articles is how the information is presented, I’ve taken a step back from journal articles, and have looked at how information is presented to different discourse communities. As an example you could look at how scholars present information to one another, and how the information is presented to us through a credible source i.e. the president.
It’s weird and cool that we both similarly explained how information must evolve and develop from your quote and mine. It is not after I posted my viewpoint, that I read what you had written down.
1. “As an organized system of techniques and technologies, documentation was understood as a player in the historical development of global organization in modernity—indeed, a major player inasmuch as that organization
was dependent on the organization and transmission of information.”
Although this reading doesn’t pertain directly to the field of creative writing, it can be said that creative writing still involves the transmission of information (sometimes fictional), and aids in historical development of a different type of global organization.
2. Like some of my classmates, I am still exploring sources that could work for the project, however finding applicable sources in the field of creative writing has been rather challenging.
I would argue that your passage pertains absolutely directly to creative writing, because creative writing through history has been used to reinforce, critique, lampoon, and satirize organizations, governments, individuals, and ideas and the use of even creative fiction to underline a point (think Voltaire or Orwell) has largely influenced how educated individuals view certain organizations and thoughts, massively shaping the present organization of the world.
I can see how rhetorical analysis could be difficult in this field. To get some thoughts flowing, it might be useful to jot down the names of some of the authors involved in creative writing, like Michael Chabon, Kazuo Ishiguro, Kevin Brockmeier, Ian McEwan, and Karl Kirchwey, and go on to see if you can identify any common themes or general conventions of creative writing in their work. I’m aware that creative writing tends to be different from typical academic writing in that one attempts to create new styles, original characters and themes, and even original genres. Perhaps you could benefit by finding examples to exploit this difference (or convention), from both academic writing and creative writing.
Evidently, there are some major differences in terms of circulation and “ecology” between physics discourse and creative writing. I think even non-physicists could probably name a scientific journal or two, but I had to look on Wikipedia to find the names of those creative writers I mentioned. Information circulates through these media, whether they be books, poems, or scientific journals. In physics, however, the goal is often to build on the work of others and extend knowledge in some subfield, making use of the information in these journals. In creative writing, while I am admittedly uninformed in this area, it seems that writers don’t necessarily build off of one another all the time. Perhaps they invent a new style altogether that wasn’t derived from the work of others, like comics, horror video games, or blogging.
I think it depends on what you call information. Information could be things like specific language and jargon or something. Ideas that someone writes down can be a form of information because these ideas are based on one’s knowledge and experiences, and this is essentially information, just not in the traditional sense. So creative writing is definitely a way to transmit information!
“…books can only be cataloged and therefore come into bibliographical existence within the context of previously approved vocabularies, such as subject headings, authority records for authors’ names, and approved syntactical structures for subject, name, and even title entries.”
In my observations thus far I am able to draw a lot from the reading we were discussing in class on Monday. One key aspect that has stuck out to me that I would like to share is the section about the problem of evidence. It discusses how we do and do not document certain things, and rather photos, audio notes, or video recordings. In international relations lectures in school include a minute between the “book” that is discussed in the article but when considering scholarly, their research does not include this type of evidence. But when the same topic is discussed for the public audience, videos and photos are used, some times to sensationalize an issue, but also raise awareness. It is interesting to see how one piece of evidence to information can be portrayed in different contexts for different discourse communities.
With this, I will also look at other forms of documentation such as pod casts and videos as this is an informal way to communicate information for my discipline used by both scholars and the public.
I think your point on evidence can related to another quote from the reading:
“The tropic quality of what we might call “informational objects,” such as the book, is noteworthy in Otlet’s work, because it is a quality that runs throughout “visionary” texts about information”
It’s interesting how in your field, evidence can be manipulated in order to benefit the viewer. In this specific scenario, I feel as if evidence can be the equivalent of “information objects”, meaning that with evidence, a paper can be noteworthy. The concept of the use of evidence and the lack of evidence even being some sort of evidence is very interesting to me.
“…it is important to examine these texts not only for their historical influence on later developments in information technology and information science but also as symptoms of the birth of a culture of information”
I believe this is principle to my field of public health, as writings done in this field are usually based of prior knowledge of a particular illness and so forth. In this discipline, it is very important to take history as an influence and slowly build off what has already been discovered. In addition to building off from the past, this discipline must create a substantial base for future research and discovery. For example, if an illness in research has been developed more thoroughly in the past, we must be able to continue to build off if it–learning new discoveries that accompany it every day. This use of information and knowledge used by experts must be able to be changed, manipulated, and formulated further.
In this research, I feel like the most difficult part is finding scholarly articles that are up to date„ because the constant progression in this field. I am still searching into other articles that I may use for this upcoming project.
I think that is interesting to mention, we were discussing the relevance of information in one of my media studies classes specifically talking about he Zika virus and how no one really knows specifics of how it is spread or contracted. As there are new health epidemics it is interesting how the lack of credible information creates more of a public scare. Maybe you can look at it from that angle…
Erica, this is a really good application of how and why health professionals share information. I think it could be helpful if you look at how articles assume readers have a prior understanding of past occurrences and how this new information builds on that past knowledge. some topics to look at might be structure of article, and citations of other studies/cases.
“While North Americans tend to segregate social
communication from business communication, East Asians were
found to value a merger of the two. In other words,
interpersonal relationships in unofficial settings have a
direct impact on formal decision-making. For example, Goldman
(1994) states:
Japanese prefer to blur the line between personal and
public relationship building by encouraging an informal
continuation of ningensei [human beingness] outside of
the negotiating table and within social arenas of
cabarets, restaurants, bars, golf courses, hot springs,
and country clubs. (p. 37)”
While this quote is out of context it sets up providing previous research on this topic. While focusing on East Asia this text provides missing information, filling in the reader, using previous studies what has been learned and confirmed by the communication community. Learning this information is crucial for understanding what the research topic of the article will be. The more research i have done the more this archetype reemerges. Why the writing is always fairly casual it remains academic, another theme that remains consistent with these communication texts.
I find it very fascinating and true theta North Americans do in fact segregate the two types of communications. In many ad books I have read however, the author talks in a very plane and laid back voice so that all readers can understand where she is coming from.
“When Otlet attempts to illustrate the flow of mental energy in bibliographical systems, he often uses examples from natural ecology such as the circulation of water through rivers, seas, and clouds in the process of rain evaporation and condensation.”
I can easily see this ecological process taking place in physics discourse. For example, the great philosopher and historian of science Thomas Kuhn pointed out that scientists work in small “research groups” within a larger web of academia. At CU, for instance, we have several labs devoted to studying liquid crystals. This pursuit is one of many research groups involved in the field of solid-state physics. The findings from these individual research groups are published in academic journals like Solid State Sciences. If you look at this link:
http://www.sciencedirect.com/science/journal/12932558
you can see that research groups from several different institutions all around the world are involved in this “research program” of solid-state physics. As I’ve pointed out in my previous comments in this class, physics documentation is as cut and dry as it can be. Every journal article I’ve looked at has the same organization, intended audience, mathematical arguments, and pictorial representations of information. Although some sub-fields have different criteria for what constitutes proof, there is a general consensus that “5-sigma”, or 5 times the standard deviation of a set of data, is the maximum uncertainty with which one can confirm a theory. We can see this in the article I’ve mentioned before:
https://journals.aps.org/prl/abstract/10.1103/PhysRevLett.116.061102.
I’ve sort of amalgamated my (1.) and (2.) here since they tie together nicely.
1. “Otlet conceives of the expansion of the book’s intellectual totality in terms of historically determined social systems of input, production, and output. For Otlet, books are part of an evolutionary process of thought, and as such, books contain what came before them in other books.”
In economics, preexisting models and concepts are always being expanded with new insights. The ideas first presented by Adam Smith in his book: The Wealth of Nations were built upon by John Keynes and so on up until our current knowledge of economics. In the specific field of economic growth, it is important to understand what has happened before to better predict what will happen.
2. Status update: I am finding that how (and if) the author of a journal choses his side for an argument is important in my discourse. As I find more sources I noticed that more often than not both sides are argued for the sake of staying neutral and out of the political aspects of economics.
“25) Latour argues that information should not be characterized in terms of a representational fact; rather, it is a relation between two places, a periphery and a center (24). This relationship is a practical relationship between what Latour terms a “center of calculation” or “center of measure” (“centre de calcul”) and the objects which that center organizes.” (Science and Institutions Section)
This quote talks about how, as a field, the professionals share and analyze the information they find and how they apply the findings to their work to solve the problem they are facing. This relates to how when marketers are creating a brand image they are constantly considering the question “what problem/desire are we trying to solve/satisfy?”. Any findings in both industries focus their shared information on how the quantitative and qualitative facts relate to how those facts could help accomplish a team’s goals.
2. I have done some research into what institution my article from last week was published through, which points to the reason the authors published the article and who they were trying to reach. The publisher is Advance OHIO which is part of a larger group Advance Local, who oversee 12 smaller branches to keep their postings to regional information (ex. Advance OHIO). I am finding other articles that share national data as well as articles that share information within a specific company to see what correlations I find in the topics discussed in class.
“Latour argues that information should not be characterized in terms of a representational fact; rather, it is a relation between two places, a periphery and a center” (24). This statement of information being a relationship rather than fact runs well with my field of study. Under political economics, people look to relationships to better understand effectiveness of policy and political interaction.
Status update: I have my articles grouped together. The use of Chinook and Google Scholar was instrumental in finding solid articles.
I like this interpretation of fact, very interesting topic. I too used Chinook and Google Scholar, it made finding sources for this assignment much easier.
1. “… they constitute a manner of establishing proof, and the criteria for proof.”
This quote stood out to me immensely because it talks about the library collecting books and how they go about deciding what counts as good proof and what does not. This is very similar to my field of study where qualitative data counts as proof just as much and quantitative, and different professors and authors go about different ways to state their proof and reasoning behind it.
2. I have found more articles that expand my field or research and allowed me to rhetorically analyze them and further find more information that could help me with project two. I have found that using Chinook has been very successfully for me and plan to finish up my research.
1. “Rhetorical diffusion leads to technological design, development, and acceptance as well as to the shaping of culture according to technological models. Tropes of technology, and especially of information, not only metaphorically repeat themselves through different domains of culture but also metonymically leverage history, forcing societies to develop according to “inevitable” technological models.”
I think that this quote pertains to my discipline, because it explains how information, knowledge, expertise, research, discourse communities, and communication conventions must develop in my discipline of communication as information within communication constantly evolves and develop within our society.
2. Status Update: I still need to research scholarly articles and look into how research and expertise is used within my discipline.
Similar to your discourse, the way information is communicated in just about any field I find extremely interesting. Especially with the ever changing popular culture, new communication platforms are created and therefore, new ways of communicating are brought into the advertising field while others are left out or simply used less frequently.